The song I wrote

[Gifted]

Well, Sar asked to see it.
I have a tune for it already so you won't get the full impact from the words. but you'll get enough.

Take your Last Serve
-By Gifted

The games at it's climax
The battles at it's peak
The lineman is on the court
The umpire is at his seat.

It's time to show me just what you're worth
It's time to take a stand
Show me just what you got,
We'll find out if you're really so grand.

It's time to
put up or Shut up
Time to Take your Last Serve
Put up, or Shut up
Time to Take your Last Serve

Six games later,
The scores at a dead heat
But this is the last round
Lets find out, how this will end!

It's time to
put up or Shut up
Time to Take your Last Serve
Put up or Shut up
Time to Take your Last Serve

Put up....
(Show me what you got)

It's time to put up......
(come on now)

Put up....
(I wanna see ya take me down so wouldja)

TAKE YOUR LAST SERVE!





... I know. It fails, doesn't it?

[Sar]

I LIKE IT!

*tries to think of tune*

[Gifted]

Dec 29, 2009 23:34:27 GMT -5 Sar said:

I LIKE IT!

*tries to think of tune*

I already have a tune. as soon as I figure out how to work youtube, I'll upload myself singing it.

[Rachel]

Can you sing, Gifted?
I like the song. It's pretty awesome... ;D

[Gifted]

I'm an okay singer.. not the worst

[Sar]

And we come closer to having a band. THIS IS SO COOL!

[Rachel]

I know, Sar! My song is kinda fail at the moment, but I will eventually finish it.

Nobody likes Misa Misa... *wanders off*

[Sar]

But the song is such a work of truth Rachel!

[Gifted]

I'm sure your song is just great, Rachel.

It's weird, before I couldn't write music at all, I've tried twice and failed miserably. But I'm already working on a secound song for our band!

I'm working on "Apples Denial,"
It's actually rock music this time, no pop music anymore.

[Rachel]

I couldn't either, Gifted. I attempted to write a song earlier in the year and, yes, it was pretty fail. Much more fail than Nobody Likes Misa Misa. At least I can relate to this one.

I look forward to hearing them both!

[Gifted]

Heres the words to my other one! I just finished it!


Apples Denial
-by Gifted

The click of a pen,
The turn of a page,
These are the sounds you hear
on your last day.
Innocent sounds, but look around,
Today is the day he's gonna take you down.

Apples Denial,
Now it's time to say goodbye
Apples Denial,
What a sad sad way to die---
[x2]

The execution note has been written.
The final prayers have been said.
The sound of apples being eaten crunch crunch
Is all you have left

Apples Denial,
Now it's time to say goodbye
Apples Denial,
What a sad sad way to die---
[x2]

Apples Denial...

That was, my final lie
I'm not sad, to see you die
Time for you, to say goodbye,
The forbidden fruit, tells no lies
It's Apples Denial
Apples Denial
Apples....
Denial

[Sar]

*mouth dropping to floor* WOW! I really want to hear the tune for that!

I mean seriously! I love 'That was, my final lie
I'm not sad, to see you die'

I was just awe stricken.

[Gifted]

Call me crazy, but it was inspiried by Lights relationship with L. I think it's fitting, don't you?

[Sar]

I can see that!

I mean, Light was his first friend and then he was betrayed and now he is numbing the feeling.

At least, that is what I got.

[Gifted]

Jan 1, 2010 18:35:52 GMT -5 Sar said:

I can see that!

I mean, Light was his first friend and then he was betrayed and now he is numbing the feeling.

At least, that is what I got.

wrong. This is from lights point of view.
Think about it. He was constantly lying to L, pretending to be friends, and then the truth is revealed: he doesn't care if L dies.

My personal favorite line is right after though. "The forbidden fruit tells no lies," I was running out of ideas for lines about apples and looked at the origanal Death Note theme song. It's translated as "The futre the forbidenn fruit fortells.. I'm going to change the dream to reality" So I used that.